Sometime I feel,
Why can’t I speak,
of the sky
and the worlds that I see
Perhaps my words are as
little as me.
I see oceans so deep,
filled with broken people’s love weep;
Clouds so dark
because of the rain that break their heart;
A flying ship, stars that can shoot,
Perhaps my life is best spent astute.
I see vast blue skies,
blue due to million spoken lies;
Poor planets cries in form of rains,
for the moon when his/her heart pains;
but they heals with dry eyes and their rings again spin,
Perhaps my patience runs thin.
I see flow of God’s art,
art that can rip your heart apart;
Sparks so tiny,
Engulfing a forest into flames huge and shiny;
A foes that can fry, friends that can fight,
Perhaps my waifs never outlast after night.
I see a seeming sad, silent moan,
inside holding a mighty teary cyclone;
Waves rising so high,
just to last for a minute before they die;
but tonight I speak,
and writes this rejected bleak,
because the dark-space is nigh,
and about to attack;
with so much to see; so much more sky,
fate wouldn’t bring me back
as vast hope will again capture me,
in some another sea.
But tonight I speak,
because in dark my freedom is at peak.
Loved each and every word.. Awesome :)
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
Deletethe first two lines of each para/stanza or whatever (not a poet :) ) was brilliantttt.
ReplyDeleteThe whole poem was amazing but the two lines, were like cherry on the cake.
Thank you so much :)
Deleter u a cake lover? :P
"art that can rip ur heart apart"....what play of words!! brilliant!
ReplyDeleteawesome..the opening stanza is brilliant...so expressive .....
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :)
Deletei like the way you put emotions while describing the god's art. very good writing! :) hope you become a voracious poet someday ;)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :) and again thank you :)
Deleteopening and each stanza is so wonderful .. but the way you pictured gods wrath .. in these line I see flow of God’s art,
ReplyDeleteart that can rip your heart apart;
Sparks so tiny,
Engulfing a forest into flames huge and shiny; and then the vast hope will again capture me,
in some another sea.
Just brilliant Ankur :) actually now i wonders your imagery power with every new writing !
Great choice of words and flow!
ReplyDeleteVery well written Ankur!
So much dejection & pain in this world...
ReplyDeleteSad we have to see. Lovely expression, Ankur.
But, hope will triumph! May darkness bring light.
darkness always brings light :) Thank you so much :)
Deleteimpactful ..:) loved the flow of the poem..!
ReplyDeleteWords and Ankur go hand in hand :)... Well written poem!
ReplyDeleteah ! i wish for this better never happens ! Thank you so much :)
DeleteNice poem, Ankur. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :)
DeleteThe second paragraph - Just amazing. As always :)
ReplyDeleteAh! I am glad I finally dropped by your site to be welcomed with such a melody of words! You are a great poet who pens emotions beautifully Ankur! :)
ReplyDeleteeven i'm glad :) Thank you so much :)
DeleteLast 2 lines - Nailed it! :D
ReplyDeleteWow Ankur what more can I say? Jus Brilliant, man :)
ReplyDeleteGoogle some words :d .. Jokes apart thank you so much :)
Deletethat's an enchanting poem with lovely imagery and words. Last lines are awesome!
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