I was so caught in silver afternoon trance that I thought
I can understand all-contained unspoken thoughts of yours before it comes from
those pink slippers lips, perhaps I could grasp it from the hazel eyes of
yours, but I didn’t, not really. The halves that I understood was only the
smudginess of your kohl and semi-precious eagerness of yours that halved me into
half. I didn’t realize, I didn’t know that two paths diverged in those mirror
utopia, with nothing but the visible spectrum of in-between bits, towards the
memory of whole bits of you and gory bits of me.
That was precious piece of writing. The emotions that you caught in a few lines.
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteBeautiful write-up!
ReplyDeleteLovely lines :)
ReplyDeletethat halved me into half.... is a tremendously powerful line! loved it!
ReplyDeletewow Ankur .. how beautifully you convey emotions .. !
ReplyDeletecharmer :)
nice write :)
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteShort and powerful post ..enjoyed reading it...
ReplyDeletehey I changed that theme by the way..respect your honest opinion.. :-)
Thank you :) .. i believe visual aspect also makes good blogs :)
Deletesorry wrong smiley again...lol
ReplyDeletehaha .. no problem :d
DeleteMystery of love reflected through eyes. Interesting!
ReplyDeleteyeah i always finds eyes interesting :)
DeleteBits and bits unite to create the whole story- it takes two to tango.
ReplyDeleteNice one, Ankur.
yeah i know .. Thank you :)
Deletealways love the way you express love and emotions.. too good :)
ReplyDeleteAmazing as usual Ankur :)
ReplyDeleteMind blown!
ReplyDeleteI hope it's blown to right place :d Thank you :)
Deletewow! nicee!
ReplyDeleteThank you .. :) Keep visiting :)
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