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An unconsciousness sailed through me seeing you sitting
at the edge of your seat with elbows resting on your knees as you started
talking to me. I began to search for myself in your flowing lines, within your
heaven of adverbs and nouns that sometimes escaped into oblivion. I saw
shimmering belted star in your smile telling me many named winter myths, burning
meteor sailing over thousand stratospheric mile to be Kohl of your eye. Every second
in a delicate frame, suddenly I realized I had something to lose, because my
constellations are made up of every little conversations we had.
pain of separation and romanticism .. burning meteor becoming Kohl of her eye, shimmering belted star in her smile and then my constellations are made up of every little conversations we had .. hayee x-) .. you are writing so beautifully these days Ankur !
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :) .. i was writing beautifully earlier too .. it just that you never read :p jokes apart again thank you :)
DeleteHow touching... We build our constellations just with one person!
ReplyDeleteHope we all get this kind of love, Ankur!
Thank you .. eventually we all do that .. hopefully :)
Deletethat was some cosmic connection!! and the kohl lined eyes make a reappearance? !!! :) :P
ReplyDeleteyup .. i always like kohl lined eyes it gives so much space to be creative as well as pleasure to see something so beautiful :) :))
DeleteSo much in such small lines...I saw the space, words and love and liked this line "heaven of adverbs and nouns" something unique in your writing :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for liking it :)
DeleteWow, how beautifully did you capture emotions! Brilliant :)
ReplyDeleteSome comments has the power to make you wordless .. Thank you :)
DeleteThis is brilliant...😄
ReplyDeleteone more beautiful piece of writing, Ankur. loved it.. <3 :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for liking it that much meera :)
DeleteWonderful buddy! You created magic out of words. Truly awesome.
ReplyDeletemagic can be seen only by those who really believe there is something like that :) Thank you !
DeleteWow.. Last line was awesome !!! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :)
DeleteCosmic connections and love.... I saw space nd yet earth too from your words ;)
ReplyDeletei always believe there are some .. i'm glad that it happened :) Thank you !
Deleteoh d pain of separation! dat was touching! i loved d kohl line a lot :-D
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