I
have always been a wanderer
It
was just that no one knew
I
always relish in being forgotten
Being
lost into the oblivion
Lovers,
you say
What
about it?
Like
the dew of mornings
Cherish
it for the happiness it brings.
Sacred
places, you say
are meant for prayers.
But the truth is, walls of hospitals
have heard more prayers each day.
are meant for prayers.
But the truth is, walls of hospitals
have heard more prayers each day.
Cobwebs
of past hold me
But
I can’t go back.
I
look back, but not for long
For
I have to go on.
Destination?
I
do not know
For
none is my ally
Nor
my foe
Hmm! interesting poem. Well composed. Its much better to know the destination.
ReplyDeleteThanks .. :) yeah keep reading !
Deleteprofound! there's a certain thrill not knowing what happens next.... to me it seemed like two different thoughts that u tried to merge into one..hai na?
ReplyDeleteThanks :) yeah kinda off .. i tried relating two different aspect from one point .. though failed to do it !
DeleteMove on, take lessons from past and move on.
ReplyDeletea wise decision one should always make !
DeleteIt has many emotions. Just realized, this is so very true -
ReplyDelete"Sacred places, you say
are meant for prayers.
But the truth is, walls of hospitals
have heard more prayers each day."
yeah .. Thanks for reading :)
DeleteNICE one
ReplyDeleteCherish the good memories and forgo the sadness !! Thats what is life all about
ReplyDeleteyeah that what life is all about .. thank you for reading .. keep visiting :)
DeleteVery interesting...you have portrayed the conflict of mind and the need to go on so well in the poem...(y)
ReplyDeleteThank you for reading :)
DeleteWonderful poem! I loved every word esp the ending lines depicting a Kabir like stance, which is the best as well. Keep writing :)
ReplyDeletefirst time visiting your blog :)
ReplyDeletewonderful reflection post,