I’m addicted
to drugs
thou of a different kind
Sort of personal drug
with every breath that I take
I need it longer
To sate my hunger
for my existence.
thou of a different kind
Sort of personal drug
with every breath that I take
I need it longer
To sate my hunger
for my existence.
Her Name-
Alprazolam
Her Eyes – Morphine
Her Lips – Brandy
Her Smile- Cocaine
Her Dream – Marijuana
Her voice – Ecstasy
Her Love – Heroin
Her Presence – Phencyclidine
Her Eyes – Morphine
Her Lips – Brandy
Her Smile- Cocaine
Her Dream – Marijuana
Her voice – Ecstasy
Her Love – Heroin
Her Presence – Phencyclidine
Again a very additively written. :) So this time it was the drugs with which she is compared .. Is there anything she is not in this world of your ? :p btw The 55fiction series is very beautiful . i guess every writeup that you have wrote on her is amazing :)
ReplyDeleteThank you :) .. Like wise you mentioned if she is world in my eye how could it be possible to not be something that this world comprises of :) again thank you :)
DeleteAwww! haha... :D This is so not you Ankur! AWESOME! Loved it to the core!
ReplyDeleteGaya ye banda gaya! :)) Uff! :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
The comparison is beautiful! x-)
:d .. Which part of it so not me ? :p .. Thank you for liking it that much :).. hahaha .. again thank you (f)
DeleteFirst time hearing a girl been described this way! :D
ReplyDeletehahaha .. somethings happens like the way even i didn't expect :d Thank you for reading it :)
Deletewow!!! so different! x-)
ReplyDelete:d .. Thank you for reading :)
DeleteNice one bro
ReplyDeleteLol..Arey Mere Bhai Yeh Ladki hai ya Drugs ki Dukaa.. :p
ReplyDeleteLekin Sahi mein Love is a mixture of Drug and I guess you are getting addicted.to it badly.. x-) x-)
Drugs ki dukaan bhi fail hai x-) .. Experience bol raha hai nai :p
DeleteAstate from which may you never get de-addicted! :)
ReplyDeleteThis one was a great read!
Until and unless i find a better addiction :d .. Thank you so much :)
DeleteI haven't heard of the last drug. I won't be trying it. I'm in love! No need...
ReplyDeleteIndeed you have taken the most valuable drug :)
DeleteClever! I know Love is drug but you have written a poem with real drugs here :)
ReplyDeleteit was comparison just .. Thank you for reading :)
DeleteInteresting. ..and different from what you have written so far :)
ReplyDeleteThanks preethi :)
DeleteAh! Intoxicating. Beautiful poem, Ankur.
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
Delete(f) [-(
ReplyDeleteThanks :)) keep visiting
DeleteThanks :o :))
ReplyDeleteOMG!! that's a heady cocktail!!
ReplyDeleteIndeed :) .. Thank you for reading :)
Deleteone hell of a love.. :P
ReplyDelete:d..Keep visiting :)
Deletelol interesting and an unique piece.. ;)
ReplyDelete.. Thanks :)
DeleteNicely written. great thoughts
ReplyDeleteLol. That's one intoxicating post ;)
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