She’s beautiful
in way love poems live in our hearts
She’s high on heels
and high on booze
in way love poems live in our hearts
She’s high on heels
and high on booze
Hazel eye, feathery eyelid, Tinted pink cheeks
and red hues lips
she’s perfect like a character from a holy books.
and red hues lips
she’s perfect like a character from a holy books.
She’s beautiful,
deep down to her soul,
She’s fun, she’s crazy
but her sorrow is what she – conceal.
deep down to her soul,
She’s fun, she’s crazy
but her sorrow is what she – conceal.
Brace yourself .. flirtatious comment are on their way for her .. :p .. btw loved the last two line .. she seems so beautiful to me from your words .. and hey congrats on your first job .. :)
ReplyDeletehahaha.. not a problem for me .. rather i would be proud :p .. thanks :)
DeleteSo very poignant but a woman is like that, she hides everything in her. Beautiful expression.
ReplyDeleteThanks .. somewhere i have understood that :)
DeleteIts like a treat to read you every time .. what a comparison "character from a holy book" and hats off for last four line .. you have said so much ..so beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Thank you :)
DeleteWell written on 'She'. The last two lines so perfect!
ReplyDeleteI am wordless...... dunno why I could connect this with myself..... :)
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you could connect this with you :) .. .. you got hazel eye ??
DeleteNaaah! :P
Delete:p
Deletethe sorrow concealed under a cheerful face.. i dono but i too feel like i am in a way connected to that one line.. jus wonderful. :)
ReplyDeletethats a delight people feeling connected with this.. thats what i guess every writer want i guess .. :) thank you :)
DeleteGreat stuff .
ReplyDeleteany woman would be pleased as punch to have a man say all these wonderful things to her!!! ur earning a lot of brownie points here buddy!!
ReplyDeleteThanks you so much ! :) :)
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