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The Morning You Gifted!



Unbraided hair, caressing your cheeks, dusted on your eyebrows, few rays of sunrise. I gazed at you, but then sleepily with partial candid eye, you met my gaze and flooded a smile. Embarrassedly in haste I looked aside and recollected, today you gifted me the most priceless gift of life,” The morning that spelt love!”


P.S - My first 55 fiction !
Topic was Write a 55 fiction about the most priceless gift you have received from your loved one.
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  1. Ritesh AgarwalJune 11, 2013 at 1:03 AM

    Quite good....given that it is ur first 55er, u have done a fabulous job

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  2. KISLAYA GOPALJune 11, 2013 at 8:09 AM

    Interestng and full of love!!
    Keep spreading love :)

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  3. RatJune 11, 2013 at 12:50 PM

    bleeding romance. lovely :)

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  4. SanjanaJune 14, 2013 at 3:13 AM

    So beautiful :)

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  5. Sri ValliJune 14, 2013 at 12:00 PM

    Beautifull 55! <3

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  6. UnknownJune 23, 2013 at 11:44 PM

    You are a true romantic!

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    1. Ankur AnandJune 24, 2013 at 9:57 PM

      Ah ! feeling privileged :) .. thanks for lovely acknowledgement :)

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  7. the little princessJune 25, 2013 at 7:46 PM

    wow Ankur this is a lovely piece...!!

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  8. Ankita SinghalJuly 9, 2013 at 1:10 AM

    Wow... It is so serene and beautiful. I loved it :)

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  9. The MukhtiarsJuly 10, 2013 at 5:47 PM

    beautiful

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  10. IndraniAugust 21, 2013 at 10:16 AM

    WoW! Beautifully worded.

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  11. AnonymousAugust 21, 2013 at 4:23 PM

    Oh ho mere bhai..Pyar Vyar ka chakkar hai kya?Mamla Garbar dekh raha hai... :p
    But seriously so lovely and romantic lines.. :)

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    1. Ankur AnandAugust 22, 2013 at 3:40 PM

      hahaha .. post can be delusional :P .. Thanks for reading it !

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