*Topic: Write a poem based the following photo prompt.
Sailing alone, far from the shore, towards the high and mad sea
A melancholy strain touches my eye; I feel a sense of qui vive
I see sun sloped down the clouds; brilliant brightness of the sky going pale
I hear the silence raspy requiem, Singing in the sky
I see no nightingale. There is stillness in the air
the whirling wind has suddenly given his frown
The sanity of the sky comes to a standstill
As if it would take years to reach down
The arid arena shows no signs of life
as if waiting for a stirring storm
I see no bird or beast pass by; the bluntness beyond any norm
Bones infested with growing fear, realization gives me a serpent kiss
Till now under a spotless cloud of ignorance, I was asking for bliss.
Once free from manacles of birth, the beauty in beauty never wanes
No bed is warmer than grave; without mutual acceptance love is vain.
Every things that are and were, now just waves on eternal time flow
One by one everyone bids us; fades away like a mere shadow.
Has the fate decreed this as inevitable, or this pain is just my pleasure’s loan?
Sailing and fighting what continues to hound, even my reflection do I own?
Redemption is what I need, is this a revelation of something else?
Or is it my misanthropic mind, that hates, loathes and repels...
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Quite a thought provoking read.
ReplyDeleteah .! i'm glad i connected with readers mind :)
DeleteOnce free from manacles of birth, the beauty in beauty never wanes ;
ReplyDeleteNo bed is warmer than grave; without mutual acceptance love is vain .. every time how do you manage to pull out such awesome lines .. seriously you are a talent :)
Thanks sanjana .. keep visiting .. i'm glad you liked :)
Deleteam speechless.. in fact, few words I had to flip thru the dictionary.. lol. superbly crafted, Ankur.. :)
ReplyDeletehahaha.. that happens with me too a lot of time :D .. Thanks meera :)
DeleteNice one Ankur
ReplyDeleteThanks ali :)
DeleteI wish to be on that boat! Lovely!
ReplyDeleteThanks Rachel .. desire of being Gnostic lies within every one :)
Deleteur a bundle of talent! the east is lucky to have u!
ReplyDeletethanks for so much of compliment :) i'm too lucky to have such a wonderful team and a blog friend like you (h)
DeleteAwesome! U r a very good poet. There is so much of maturity in ur verses that are weaved beautifully! I loved these lines "No bed is warmer than grave; without mutual acceptance love is vain"
ReplyDeletethanks AS , I'm glad you enjoyed it that much :)
DeleteLovely words here, Ankur.
ReplyDeleteBest wishes to you & your team :)
Wonderfully done Ankur..best wishes.. :-)
ReplyDeletegood luck to you and your team :) you wrote all that by looking at that photo prompt??? :O awesome :)
ReplyDeleteGreat words and imagination. Good luck Ankur. :)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written, Ankur.
ReplyDeleteYou write well and this too is done so well.
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