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Let's walk Together !



Let's walk Together
Just for a while
You Speaking from the Corner of your eye
While me being lost in you and your smile
With breeze your tresses, caressing your cheeks
And me putting it aside,every time it kisses your lips
My finger Sometime touching the finger of your hand
And me wishing for time to still stand
Me Drowsing in the drop
that had touched you so dearly
And envying every air molecule
that even touches you merely
Understanding your silence and you
knowing the part of you I didn't know

Let's walk a little longer
Just towards the forever
where 'me' and 'you'
Become 'us'
And vanishes once for all.


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  1. SayantiniMay 25, 2013 at 12:33 PM

    So, romantic...carefully chosen words. Get going....

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  2. CreativeUrja.comMay 26, 2013 at 12:37 AM

    Very nice poem , reminded me of someone from the past. I wish that becoming ''us'' should be more common in this world full of automaton kind of people. Sorry for sounding cynical but that is truth of the present time.Anyways coming back to the poem i liked this line the most" My finger Sometime touching the finger of your hand And me wishing for time to still stand " , this is actually the first step in early days after you fell in love.

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    1. Ankur AnandMay 28, 2013 at 12:56 AM

      Thanks .. Was just trying to write from initial to end in short .. keep visiting :)

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  3. KISLAYA GOPALMay 26, 2013 at 6:36 PM

    Wonderful poem Ankur, you are one of the best at love poems.
    You Speaking from the Corner of your eye
    While me being lost in you and your smile
    These are just so innocent lines full of purity.
    And the last stanza truly denotes eternal love.. :)

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    1. Ankur AnandMay 28, 2013 at 1:27 AM

      Thanks Kislaya .. Ah! that coming from a blogger like you means a lot :)

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  4. IndraniJune 11, 2013 at 7:46 PM

    Nice lines, well written.

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  5. Ankita July 12, 2013 at 9:14 AM

    Lovely! the intense feeling with with u have written it as beautifully become the very essence of the poem :)

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    1. Ankur AnandJuly 13, 2013 at 5:02 AM

      Thanks .. for so intense comment :) keep visiting !

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  6. RatAugust 26, 2013 at 2:38 PM

    wow this is so romantic... :)

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  7. IndraniAugust 26, 2013 at 4:57 PM

    Today I read this again... yet so refreshing!
    Beautiful poem Ankur keep writing.

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  8. BhavyaAugust 26, 2013 at 5:41 PM

    Lovely Ankur! I love reading about Love the way you define it. Do keep writing for us more and more.

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  9. AnonymousAugust 26, 2013 at 6:31 PM

    Kuch Dur tum chalo Kuch Dur hum chale phir..Phir kya Rickshaw kar lenge.. :p
    Joke hai Ankur Bhai.. :-)
    But as I always as your Poems are very romantic and each and every time I read your Poems,the Romantic me gets inspired..x-) cheer

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    1. Ankur AnandAugust 27, 2013 at 1:58 PM

      oh rickshaw .. aasman sai sidha jaamen pe le aaye tum to usko :P .. 8-) ..btw thanks .. :)

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  10. AnonymousAugust 26, 2013 at 8:39 PM

    Magnificent !!
    looks like an old post recently posted !

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  11. preethiAugust 26, 2013 at 10:35 PM

    Lovely poem. Simple words so effectively used :)

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  12. IndraniMarch 28, 2014 at 2:23 PM

    You should seriously think of sending your lines to greeting card companies.
    Truly beautiful lines.

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  13. Jyotsna BhatiaMarch 28, 2014 at 3:55 PM

    Beautiful words Ankur. And I agree with Indrani above :)

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  14. AnonymousMarch 28, 2014 at 4:09 PM

    Just one of the poems you would like to read again and again ! that was some good composition !

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  15. Midnight scribblesMarch 28, 2014 at 10:49 PM

    Aww that was quite cute. Very beautifully written too :)

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  16. Amrita SabatMarch 29, 2014 at 1:32 AM

    Wow....superb write!! Romantic, mushy, tingling!

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  17. Anita SabatMarch 29, 2014 at 11:32 AM

    Really beautiful, Ankur! May everyone get to experience such walk :)

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  18. UnknownMarch 30, 2014 at 2:21 AM

    Very beautiful indeed. Lovely lines.

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