Since
the inception of this feeling I have loved you and half of my life I will do
that, but now I’m done of something. I’m done caring, I’m done taking the
blame, and I’m done running after you. The only regret I’ve got is playing
house under my pillow and letting melancholia curl up beneath my eyelids every time
I tasted smoke in the back of my throat at four in the morning thinking about
you with someone else, when shiver creeps down my spine.
That’s
real.
Me
with dilated pupil whenever you tasted digital and burning somewhere inside me.
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P.s- New series of 100 word story (first time writing in 100 words). I don't smoke or do drugs or recommend it to anyone . I use them in my post just to make it feel more intricate and intriguing.
P.S.s- Those who think i write my personal account here.Such Noobs :P. I'm just experimenting with every form of writing. i'm not comfortable in writing personal life . The only two post My First Job and believe-in-memento contains my life here :D
Ah! the melancholy of loss and smoking ...well written Ankur.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :)
Delete:) this reminds me of somethings not so pleasant
ReplyDeleteyeah .. sometime things goes other way ! Thank you for read :)
DeleteThis is sad but I must say, very well expressed.
ReplyDeleteyeah .. Thank you :)
Deletecan just feel it ! playing house under my pillow and whenever you tasted digital just brilliant stuff Ankur :)
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ReplyDeleteI've nominated you for the sunshine award!:) hope you accept it!
Thank you so much Sabeeha .. :) definitely !
DeleteDejection and melancholy... Ah ! they walk hand in hand in your piece .
ReplyDeleteIsn't that is true with our life too ? thank you for your read :)
Deleteso good to imagine the situation .. dont worry .. it will bring in more creativity ...
ReplyDeleteYeah it is like that :) Thank you for your visit and read .. keep visiting and reading :)
DeleteBeautiful..
ReplyDeleteHey this is wonderful... :)
ReplyDeleteThe pain in writing comes only if U've xperienced even a wee bit of it... :P & urs has pain....
Thank you .. :)
Deleteif you write about earthquake and flood displaying the pain does that means you have experienced a wee bit of it ? :p :p
Very Well Written..........
ReplyDeleteHow well you express!
ReplyDeleteTruly wonderful!
The feeling of losing along with the pain and pathos...wonderfully expressed.. :-)
ReplyDeleteI totally agree..words express it all..
DeleteThank you pratikshya :)
Deleteis it the feeling of having been through so much that he just stops caring about things and taking blame for things....and takes refuge under the blanket of weed? powerful 100 words!
ReplyDeleteidea was to write what sometime people actually feels when they care for someone so much .. and gets fed up when that care make other person think that this is granted no matter what they say or do .. weed was for showing why it hurts as people usually say the truth when he/she is not in his/her conscious mind .. Thank you :)
Deleteu express so well!! 100 words but still packed with emotions!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :)
DeleteGosh! That was so real, & not smoky!!! :)
ReplyDeleteGood job as usual, Ankur!
Thank you so much :)
DeleteYou have expressed the dejection and melancholy so well.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your read :)
DeleteWow, I don't even know such words which you use so easily :)
ReplyDeletesame i feel when i read yours :) Thank you for the read :)
DeleteEven with few words - You are magical !!
ReplyDeleteThanq so much :)
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